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Friday 16 September 2016

Pourquoi Story

Many hundred years ago in a country across the sea, there lived a Tongan king named Tasi. Tasi  loved the tongan community and he wanted to keep it safe. When Tasi first became King he explored the land to see what he owned. What he found is what he wanted to keep forever, a lake with the most beautiful and clear water. Tasi found out that a tribe was trying to capture the palace.


Tasi ordered his strongest men (Fokisi the main one) to go and protect the lake. All the men were ready for the attack. When the attack came all the men charged at each other and were ready to kill. Tasi was staying back and waiting for the chief to get to the gates. “You will never get past me” Shouted King Tasi “Ha ha ha I will” Boomed Chief Takalua. Then Chief Takalua started to run towards King Tasi. The men that were guarding the lake were doing a good job, Boom! There was a massive crash. The palace was being destroyed.


The palace was taken over but Fokisi ran away to find the closest village to hide. Chief Takalua was now King Takalua. The new king found the lake and wanted to make it so it ran down the ocean. King Takalua had a plan and he was sure it would work.
No one knows that king Tasi was still alive hiding until he was ready to fight.


King Takalua had plans to extend the lake to the ocean so the pure water could enter the ocean and make the water clean and healthy. Fokisi ran back to the palace to spy on the new King. Fokisi learnt their plans and knew that it was going to waste the pure water.


The news got out to Tasi that one of his men was alive and Tasi went out and looked for him. A few days later Fokisi found Tasi. Fosiki told Tasi about their plans. Tasi was angry and wanted to talk to Takalua. Tasi went back to the palace “What are you doing?” Shouted Tasi. “I am sharing pure water with everyone else” Takalua says softly. “No I won’t let you” Shouts Tasi. Tasi then throws a knife takalua.


Takalua Catches the knife and throws it back at Tasi. Tasi falls to the ground and is bleeding out, “He is now dead” Shouted King Takalua. “A new king has risen!” Screamed all of the men. The pure water entered the ocean, and every village had pure water. Everyone was happy that a new king wasn’t selfish.

Moral: Share your things with everyone because if you do you will be respected.


This is my pourquoi story that I have written. I had to write about how something came from Tonga A critical friend checked my work. He used DRAFT to edit my work. My story is about a king who won't share his pure water. I think this task was a fun task to do because it was interesting to write about Tonga.


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