Her first instinct was to scream. This, as it turned out, was a very bad idea. Palmer screamed in deep fear as her neighbors could hear her. Her neighbors came to check out what was happening, as soon they came Palmer was still screaming. Her neighbors came knocking on her door, Then it stopped and the door opened. The neighbors ran away screaming thinking that a ghost was in the house, but it a little Palmer that has opened the door. Palmer was in great fear of who was that, she couldn't think that who was that. Palmer was left alone as her parents when somewhere when she was asleep.
This is my quick write I worked on with June. I had to use DRAFT to make this quick write sound better.
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