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Tuesday 1 March 2016

DRAFT practice


LI: To write a stretched sentence
LI: To Use DRAFT to check our sentences.

Who: Jonny

What: Jonny ran

When: As night fell Jonny ran

Where: As night fell Jonny ran in the streets

Why: As night fell Johnny ran in the streets because he was chased down the road by two motorbike riders.

D.R.A.F.T version
As night fell, Johnny ran down the street as he was getting chased by two angry motorbike riders.

Today for writing I created a sentences and used DRAFT to make it better.  

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